002_Yuki_Onna
When I decided to become an Author I started making things up. Hello readers. Support my novels: Hours of Darkness, The mysterious house (on hold), Eden of Rothania and one upcoming novel soon.
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Shameless author here- who's giving her book a five star. I'll keep it real short for all my dear valuable readers. HOURS OF DARKNESS IS FINALLY BACK WITH VOLUME 2. HORRAAYYYY!!! The volume 2 name is: From Darkness to Dawn! Release rate would be: 2 chapters/ week. Any questions- don't forget to comment below!! Happy reading!!!!!!!! There are so many questions which will be answered in this vol. I hope you all will tag along. Ciao Adios.
exactly what we would like to know @_@
Okay, this took me a while, to be honest, a few parts of this novel felt not that relatable to me xD. I'm not SAYING IT'S BAD OR ANYTHING. Anyways, let's get into reviewing. Writing quality- The story is quite descriptive, but what I felt was lacking or maybe it's just how the author writes was the 'conversation descriptions'. Okay so, it's just enrapturing to see the descriptions while the convo is going. For example- He put down his tea cup, "You might not be right either, Mr. White" he continued as he clasped his hands, "Blah blah blah" Something like that, which I randomly came up with right now. Other than that I think it was nice. Stable updates- It's 6 chapters per week, that's great. Great work author! Keep fighting... Story Development- It's fast-paced in a good way, Some places there might be times you'll feel ''oh that's way too early or fast'' but it's all for a reason~ Let's go with that. Character Design- It's just the inceptive stage of this novel, so I won't really comment much on the characters because, in these types of novels, we have a lot to discover. World Background- The timeline the author chose is not too medieval but not modern either, that's my favourite timeline, to be honest. I think it's in the 1700s to 1800s if I am not wrong. However, I wonder if they have thematic elements in the story. Great work author~ Keep fighting, you are awesome!
This story is simply great and entertaining~ Imagine having an FL where she will go as crazy as ever and still won't say it was her fault, it's like "I have every fucking right to do it!" I mean it's just so fun. Let's get into reviewing~ Writing quality- I liked how the author writes. You know, it's easy to go with, and it won't disturb your reading flow. Simple descriptions and a good pace. I really really want to try writing like that. Stability of updates- For now, they are 7 chapters per week and I believe that's really a good number. Good work author. Story development- It's nice, there's not a single dull moment, the pacing is nice and I think its kinda fast? But yea, it has proper context and every action has a meaning behind it so ye~ Character Design- It was my first time to read such a crazy character- Okay, if we remove Aaron Warner, Zade Meadows and Cardan (LOL) from the list and a few more sure- she was the craziest character I read and she is crazy which I feel like in a good way? I have yet to read a few more chapters and I feel it's not that bad. But ye~ I like her. She is fun, and oh damn all the eye candies. World Background- This is also a really great job done by the author, I won't say much about it since I feel there's so much more to discover!! P.s author should change the book name to Eye Candies in Another World :3
Unpopular opinion- but I think like this she will fix her attitude @_@
that's me thinking of eating instant noodles
Basically, she couldn't live her childhood T_T
Definitely an Eye candy
Come onnnn- the floowww with what she was going.
When the first stanza is overly relatable- I'm invested.
Wake up to reality~
NO ONE'S STOPPING ME FROM GIVING THIS BOOK A 5-STAR. I am finally done reading, no, no hold-up, I haven't really caught up with all the chapters because our dear author is super hyped up and uploads chapters rigorously. So yes, a few more left. Let's start reviewing~ Writing quality- Straight up 5 stars, the description, oh my! I liked it. Here's the thing, You can actually vividly imagine what's happening right there so, I would say it was so good. Cons- At some places (not gonna mention exactly what because want to keep it spoiler-free) I felt that the emotions of characters could be portrayed much better, not only in the dialogue writing sense- but overall as the characters' emotions- sometimes, I couldn't relate to it but meh. Stability of updates- As I mentioned earlier, it's super awesome. Story Development- Okay so, the pace is really good. At first, I felt as if it moved really fast from how the kingdom is and how the princess is and then the declaration. It happened in a zoop zap. But as I kept reading, I felt like "ye- it happened for a reason" Character Design- I think the author really put effort into this thing, I mean while reading- I could just understand why certain people made certain comments and I could just differentiate them pretty well like their personalities. World Background- In this part, I believe we have so much more to explore, but so far so forth it's nice only so ye.
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ohhh now I get it. Thats such a cool concept 🤧🤧🙂💞
I did gave spaces in between but I don't understand the hell is wrong with it here T_T pls bear with me.
Before anyone here starts reading my review let me just make myself super clear that I am a huge reader, It's not like I only read webnovels- in fact, I don't read that many webnovels but paperbacks. That's why I am a sucker for descriptive language and conversations. Okay, so now. Here's my review of this cute story: Writing Quality- I gave it a 3. I feel like the emotions and the surrounding description can be a bit better than how it was originally written. Instead of writing sounds like "uuwaaah" and "sob sob" and "chop-chop", try describing them. 'Cause that makes more impact and lets the reader connect with your world and characters. Then the mixing of povs, I mean it's understandable, It happens even I as a writer did that mistake so it's not a biggie. But how you write dialogues is a biggie, Girl. You are writing the character name at the end in brackets. No lies, I thought they were some sounds at first. And then the fighting scene, it's supposed to be a thrilling and exciting part of the novel, so put the right description there. Overall, what I mean is to try describing more of what is needed to improve your character or the world. Now, no matter what I wrote above the story was enjoyable, the thing I liked about your writing was that it is super easy to follow. In the prologue, you've already described how it all ended and through the main chapters it was really easy to understand the story and what your character is trying to convey, I really admire how you described the town, till now where I have read. It was my favourite chapter. Stability of Updates- 5 stars. The author is doing a wonderful job of uploading almost every day. I really really want to take inspiration from you and start doing that with my novels too. It is really an important part of webnovel before it gets popular. Hehe~ if you know what I mean. Story Development- 5 stars. Go read and you'll know what I mean. It is flowing smoothly, and the pacing is nice. It won't let you get bored to a point. Character Design- I gave it a 5. But there's a thing I will surely wanna point out, try describing them too. Like- I don't really know how to make you understand, so here's goes to nothing. Look at this example- Lyla felt her ears twitch and her tail flick, signs of her growing irritation. She hated being ignored, especially by someone who owed her a favour. "Hey, are you even listening?" she clenched her fist as she slammed it on the table. So like that, I mean it describes that she has ears and a tail which makes her a cat girl. That's what I was trying to tell you but yea it's your story and you have the right. Finally, World Background- Here's the thing, I understand that you described in prologue how the world is, you described the town they live in, that's cool. However, world background is not till there, you need to describe the surroundings your character is in while they are doing something. It's just I felt there was a lack of it. That's why I pointed it out. Overall this story is well-deserved, 4.4/- It was enjoyable and I think I will keep reading. Keep doing what you are doing cuz you are awesome at it.
It will be our little secret Ueluel-chan!