The_Celestial_King

This would have been more understanding. Great job, Brick

That will be great 😃

Good chapter

Good chapter. This interaction is better than In All Creation shit. Haha. sorry.

This reveal might be exciting for some but to me it was outright boring and the very reason was it's all show not tell. Author just threw things at us with no context built up and he expects us to be hype. I'm really not hype but annoyed at how it was executed. One thing i hate about chapters like this was every time Rowan achieve something, he most be compared with someone else. E.g, He got great number of angel and then we were told other Celestial Creators are weaker and he is amazing. (I don't think we need this context here, since we are not in the Celestial Realm yet.) All their hype and might was being reduced to nothing before Rowan and I truly believe when Rowan face them in the future they will be hype up just so Rowan crush them (Classic Cliche). To me no hype at all. Then the phrase [In all of Creation] is so boring and hateful to me that i cringe the moment i see it. [I get Rowan is special and i believe so] what we need was his actions should show that. E.g, The best thing Rowan did was trick us all that his reflection is him and the reveal was great and we are hyped for that. Not that he create more angels than other celestials. Another thing i hate to read was [Rowan Love his children] what children? To us they are nothing but dummies. Apart from Lady of Shadow who else can we name in an instant. We are supposed to roots for the children, love them and so we can understand Rowan love for them. But no, it was all dummies to make us feel fake sympathy for Rowan. Another thing was Rowan paid great price in creating Source Level Treasure. i almost throw my phone away when I saw that he was just using his body as a material and then sentences later we were told he hold himself from recovering for better tribulation. [That was a worthless price since he can recover. That is definitely a not a Great Price] Great Price should be using his loving angels, or humans or creatures from within his dimensions as a sacrifice to make the weapons and they most be able to be resurrected. But no, his body was the price and he can just heal from it [How down grading] Great Price should also be that every piece of him he used he lost it and can't recover it forever. That means his dimensional body has forever shrunk in size and he can't get it back at all. Maybe until he reached 4th Dimension and even with that there will be repercussions. Sorry for the ranting, Brick is greater writer than me but sometime he forgets a good progress execution and just bulldoze everything fast and leave them which i felt he can definitely do better but he limit himself. Maybe he just want to speed blitz the arc or something.

Great Chapter

Please don't throw goodies just for the sake of it at Rowan. It felt redundant and lack excitement due to all what Rowan can do alone. How can he acquired another Singularity? Just because he was awesome or because he gain by luck!!!

Hmm. Interesting, My questions are seem to be answering!

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I really do not know why Primodrdial Keeper was hated by Rowan. To me it feel pointless.