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this is a bowl of incense on a chain
since the Stalker can teleport to any dimension and anywhere in the world, it would be interesting to see the chapter where he and Ryuto pass through the worlds and finally arrive in the Warframe universe. and kill Stalker where it all began would be symbolic (I used a translator, there may be inaccuracies in the translation)
Well, one chapter is not worth judging about the entire work. What about the female character? I think it's a bit like a Korean woman's reincarnation (21st century killers, doctor, herbalist, etc.) I'm not saying it's bad, it's just like each other. If I understand correctly, she will have an ability that will be related to technique. Regarding the plot, I will say that the beginning is not bad, but I would add more chapters 2-3 for a complete understanding of what is happening in the world, about the main character, his relationship, etc. (I used a google translator to write the commentary and read the chapter so there may be inaccuracies)
мы моем включить туда кюри и у нас будет уже межрасовый гарем
Afton will be able to make a biomechanical or cybernetic arm with his knowledge in medicine and science (like the arm of the Winter Soldier or a prosthetic Fullmetal Alchemist, but capable of modifying or having a retractable weapon like the revolvers of Misa Prime from Warframe), then this is not so bad.For example, this arm is from Deus Ex and would be classified as an energy weapon.