LordMomonga_squire
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Lol.
This.
indicating that there is a way to bypass death so early kinda makes the stakes feel a lot less since we all know there's someone with the potential to avert death.
I saw this coming 🤣
Bad move imo
I like the way you think.
Whoa, creative! What Webnovel inspired this book?
Mountains? I'm confused now.
Doesn't matter, my mind registered him as one.
Well, I have enjoyed the major bits of the story so far but I find the possibility of me drifting away from that feeling of excitement and enjoyment. I expected the people of the Colosseum to react a bit more than that, you described their reactions in a way that it felt that there weren't as many as you implied earlier and what about the prestigious figures on the elevated platform and the human Gandalf, I believe that it would have been nice if you had depicted their reactions, that perhaps would have built more tension.
Argghh, not the arrogant kid cliche.
Why do I feel that this contradicts my perceived personality of him?
I love how descriptive this is
I love how you went against the annoying trope of " Nobody found it until a chosen teen did"
My amicable grammarian🙌