Wow! Brilliant writing so far. Your technique's also refreshing to read. From the few chapters I've read so far I can say you're deserving of five stars at the least. Just keep improving dear author!

Wow! Brilliant writing so far. Your technique's also refreshing to read. From the few chapters I've read so far I can say you're deserving of five stars at the least. Just keep improving dear author!

Thank you very much for this review. I'll improve where I can especially on paragraph length. I hope the story has been quality enough so far too. I'll also try to get a good cover. Thanks.

Thank you very much for your review! I'm working on the paragraph stuff and I've shortened them so far .I'll take them into consideration next time. Please keep reading 💛

Wow! Thank you very much for your honest review. Will keep improving. Hope you'll stay till the end to find out the answers to all your questions ♥️

Wow! Brilliant writing so far. Your technique's also refreshing to read. From the few chapters I've read so far I can say you're deserving of five stars at the least. Just keep improving dear author!

Wow! Brilliant writing so far. Your technique's also refreshing to read. From the few chapters I've read so far I can say you're deserving of five stars at the least. Just keep improving dear author!

Wow! Brilliant writing so far. Your technique's also refreshing to read. From the few chapters I've read so far I can say you're deserving of five stars at the least. Just keep improving dear author!

Thank you dear reader 🤲

Thank you dear reader 🤲

The story's been brilliant so far, just like the author. Good world building and nice pacing to it. The updates are also nice. Keep up the good work author!

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. The updates are also nice. Keep up the good work author! You'll only get better!

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. The updates are also nice. Keep up the good work author! Never stop writing!

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. The updates are also nice. Keep up the good work author! Nice work author

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. The updates are also nice. Keep up the good work author! keep up the good work

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. The updates are also nice. Keep up the good work author! It can only get better.

Wow, fantastic so far, especially with the word play and world build up. The characters have been quite enthralling and it's never a dull moment. Keep it up author 👍

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. It's also structurally okay. I'm hoping the author is able to keep up the good work and even improve further. Good work author!

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. It's also structurally okay. I'm hoping the author is able to keep up the good work and even improve further. Good work author!

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. It's also structurally okay. I'm hoping the author is able to keep up the good work and even improve further. Good work author!