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Mad_man132hCommentéWhere he getting this info it can’t all be in a book
Near New York on Road Island is Camp Half-Blood, where demigods like me go for 'safety' from the monsters. Those words made me scowl at the cowardice of these other half-gods.- Mad_man132dCommenté
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Naruto, the Villain: Ero SystemdetailPokemon Hentai: Transmigrated to Pokemon World with Absolute HypnosisAnime et bandes dessinées · mtl_7330 - Mad_man1319dCommenté
How does he have a grimoire they don’t just appear you have to go get them at designated places
Seeking a quiet corner, Gojo retrieved his grimoire from a hidden pocket. It was a plain, unadorned book, unlike any he'd seen in his past life. It offered no response to his cursed energy, a frustrating yet strangely intriguing silence. - Mad_man1319dCommenté
Really I would think it would be more interesting to have him in something other that jujutsu kaisen
Timeline Eps 1 After Yuji Eat Sukuna Finger - Mad_man1324dCommenté
It only swaps with living things or objects with enough cursed energy. Nitpick I know, but just letting you know
Boogie Woogie : by clapping you can swap places with anything within your range. - Mad_man1326dCommenté
Why just Ryomen sukuna is enough it’s overkill and boring for the rest to be there. Takes importance and imap away from sukuna skill set
SKILLS; - Mad_man1326dRépondu à fangyuan10
Hey this story is definitely one of the better ones over read a lot of times people struggle with grammar or making sure the person acts in character. I read fanfics all the time and they act wildly different from there original counterparts sometimes. Just take your time to flesh and plan out the story.
detailAscension of the Limitless [A TOWER OF GOD X GOJO SATORU FANFIC]Anime et bandes dessinées · fangyuan10 - Mad_man1328dCommenté
I think rather than reincarnating with wishes he should just woken up as baby geto or whatever age you would want. I the other wishes are stupid and it’s more interesting for him to just try and improve on geto’s own abilities using his knowledge rather than him getting wishes
Ch 2 Reincarnation - Mad_man1329dPostédetailAscension of the Limitless [A TOWER OF GOD X GOJO SATORU FANFIC]Anime et bandes dessinées · fangyuan10
- Mad_man131mthCommenté
This one
Percy Jackson + Riordan verse - Mad_man131mthCommenté
This makes no sense It should be her giving it to him
The guy gave me a letter stating that I am allowed to possess wands, so it should be fine. - Mad_man131mthCommenté
It should say stared at her
"Calm," I said and stared at him. "Look into my eyes." - Mad_man131mthCommenté
I feel like this is kinda a boring motivation and isn’t very compelling, like getting strong to survive the marvel universe
And finally, the third condition: I wouldn't conquer or destroy the world. The world entertained me. I'd have endless fun scaring people, even venturing to other countries to terrorize anyone, be they heroes, villains, or cosmic beings.detailMonster in a world of heroes and villains [temporary break]Anime et bandes dessinées · tyronxxz - Mad_man131mthCommenté
I feel like his dissent Into evil was to fast. And I protagonist who only wants to kill people just to kill them is boring. And you might say he’s also trying to get strong but that feels secondary like it’s a byproduct of his killing and not the reason for it.
Next, I began to undress her, cutting her stomach while singing an old song. Slowly, I extracted her organs and arranged them like a scarf around Alice's neck. "Perfect!! It's great," I exclaimed.detailMonster in a world of heroes and villains [temporary break]Anime et bandes dessinées · tyronxxz - Mad_man131mthCommenté
I don’t really like when people do this. Nothing against the story for it I just dislike it.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.detailMonster in a world of heroes and villains [temporary break]Anime et bandes dessinées · tyronxxz - Mad_man131mthCommenté
I feel like this is to much and at the same time doesn’t matter, I mean he’s the shadow monarch your over complicating things when his shadow monarch powers are more than enough for him to steamroll everything
I would have to continue to purify my core to see if I discover anything new. So for now the only thing I could do is practice the Rokushiki Techniques and purify my mana core. - Mad_man131mthRépondu à cardo_sinclair
- Mad_man131mthRépondu à FanboyDeowerpower
Yeas I know I was just using an exaggerated example to get my point across. You still have the problem of him being able to have unlimited resources.
The soul then said: I want the power of Minecraft's creative mode with the Player Hub. The soul then thought: this way I can have money, portions, magic books, power of creation among other things. - Mad_man131mthRépondu à FanboyDeowerpower
I feel like give him Minecraft creative is a little much. I mean he would basically be unkillable with the infinite amount of golden apples and undying totems he could create. You should had given him the ability to craft stuff from Minecraft if he gathered the right materials. So he would have to work for it.
The soul then said: I want the power of Minecraft's creative mode with the Player Hub. The soul then thought: this way I can have money, portions, magic books, power of creation among other things.