MoncaiMango

He believes that his life was lived uneventfully, and that the courage he showed by destroying his soul somehow moved a powerful entity enough for them to turn back time for him, and give him a second chance at living. The last sentence is the author saying that what he said was bs, because we as the readers know thats not what happened, the mc however, wholly believes it though.

An expeession for a cheating woman I think

Applying the laws of Earth physics to a world where people that can move several tons of pure steel and or metal, and move faster than the speed of sound is illogical. Even if by Earths logic it shouldnt be possible, the mc is faster and stronger than anything humanly possible. If its not something like her body not having the time to twist due to how fast her neck was snapped, than it could be something even simpler like her body managing to twist (a detail the author wouldve left out) but it not doing anything as the speed and strength of which it was snapped were faster than the body could fully react to

Even with an equal increase across the body, with the disparity in their strength, the element of his mana subssitution, and other factors, it would take someone far superior to her in terms of bodily strength to resist their neck being snapped by the mc in particular. The other guy who got his neck snapped (I think) right after this may be less believable as he was in fact, superior to her in bodily strength, but to the mc I would assume twisting her neck faster than she or her body could react, is far easier than causing craters in solid ground, and going toe to toe with giant statues, and people with super strength

I dont think that logic would apply to someone faster than some cars, and with the strength to shatter stone, and bend metal with their bare hands. If he just snapped her neck faster than her body could turn, would that not kill her?

10 chapters in as of now, and I can honestly say that this novel has potential. It has good writing quality, with little to no serious errors in grammar, decent story development, and its unique compared to what I usually read on the app. Excited to see how it progresses, and I hope the author keeps writing

Think of a pitchfork as a three pronged rapier. Regardless of if it was made for stabbing, as long as it still had a pointed tip, it can slash. It probably wouldnt do as much as stabbing, maybe a bit awkward, but it can slash perfectly fine

Chapter 3 Life isnt easy, author said he looked 10

Can’t remember this scene, but I assume they hit the mcs “sister” or “daughter”? Torture seems fitting tbh