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PageNotFound1dCommentéradiation in a bottle lol
Moving on, the Holocron revealed that Vadim Zaytsev had mastered every technique taught by his Jedi mentor, which he recorded in the Holocron, including a particularly interesting one named "Ionize." This technique had the capability to disable and destroy machinery.- PageNotFound1dCommentéCh 25 Prelude to the Festival [2]
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The shorter the name, the scarier the object- Bingbong The Oathslayer is scary, but Throngler is terrifying
Bear - PageNotFound3dCommenté
regardless of the law
Rizevim is standing in front of a test capsule, in that capsule we can see a girl about 5 years old ,she has sliver hair and a doll like body which for some people we have a hard time controlling their hormones.(lolicon s). - PageNotFound3dCommenté
Nitpicky, but why would you put hand scythes in sheaths? The blades face inward, and the handle is perpendicular to them, so not only would it be more of a pain, it would be useless.
My kusarigama left their sheaths, clutched in my hands and I connected them to the chains, brining them out. The purple flames covered the chains and the Kusarigama as I spun the chains around. - PageNotFound3dCommenté
Gramma and spelling got nuked, lol
"I am Dante, a doctor and cybernetic who has opened shop here.. I over all the services a normal doctor gives and more.. if someone loses a limp or other body part I can replace it with cybernetic limps if they are interested.." the woman nodded along with Dante's explanation replying, - PageNotFound8dCommenté
author is cooking
Victory before grief. Because if they didn't win, there wouldn't be anyone left to mourn. - PageNotFound17dCommenté
Bruh
Kazutora smelled a sweet scent, and he understood that it was coming from Kurenai. His face turned a bit red as he thought of those fat pieces of meat touching his body, and Kurenai, who saw his red face thought that he must be shy with the interaction. - PageNotFound18dCommenté
:(
'So handsome! No! No! Kurenai, what are you thinking?' - PageNotFound18dCommenté
Master and Expert in two martial arts? Incompetent??
Overall Evaluation: If competence and incompetence--mostly incompetence were to reside in a human, it would be you.] - PageNotFound18dRépondu à lostflame_753
The most random person 😭
Megan said "Typical Potter move." - PageNotFound18dCommenté
who???
Over the course of the last month, the trio talked of what would happen once the first task was complete. Harry's girlfriend had been watching Ron and Hermione and had seen how their star was fading without Harry around. - PageNotFound18dCommenté
who??? you can't just force a relationship like that, there's no bond between the characters
Cedric quickly became the older brother Harry needed just as the girl became more than a friend. The feelings they shared for each other had built up over their meetings and they both knew it was more than a friendship but not one of a brother/sister relationship so even oblivious Harry could tell that there was something different about her. - PageNotFound20dRépondu à King_Of_SpaceTime
I'm well aware lol, it's just that that is an immediate clue
(I'm crazy, this may be the biggest coincidence of all or I actually reincarnated as Odin's son in the Marvel universe.) - PageNotFound22dCommenté
1) don't do author notes in the middle of a chapter, it breaks flow 2) reading is a written medium, not visual, so take your time; describe in more detail how he wakes up, what he sees, hears, feels- you can visualise all of that as the author but you need to convey that to us, in as few words as possible, whenever possible.
(A/N: Something feels missing you know. What do you think?? Ugh... this is frustrating, if you can improvise this scene do comment please...) - PageNotFound22dCommenté
lambs*?
But they were not planning to be helpless victims in this war. They were more than just lost lamps Tai Lung could force and control to his whims. - PageNotFound24dCommenté
aaaand I'm gone
I felt the exquisite softness against my lips and saw Lena's eyes widen in shock and evident confusion. - PageNotFound25dCommenté
pacifist?
It was a very bewildered Argo who read Drifter's message. She had heard of pacific mobs before - the kind that only retaliated if players attacked, but didn't make the first move - but never of one that actively tried - and apparently succeeded - in endearing itself to players. - PageNotFound28dCommenté
broken leg before proper medical care? they're gonna have to amputate
The number of men I left behind me, screaming in pain, began to increase. Some had broken legs, most were unconscious. Those still awake started screaming in pain, alerting the other small farms I encountered along the way. I saw some curious children peeking out, trying to figure out what was happening before being dragged away by their mothers. - PageNotFound29dRépondu à Dr_Void
Loki isn't Odin's son in Norse mythology, he's his sworn brother
(I'm crazy, this may be the biggest coincidence of all or I actually reincarnated as Odin's son in the Marvel universe.)