HankTheFisherMan
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HankTheFisherMan21dPostéRead till chapter 50. Its a pretty decent story, but just not my cup of tea. Harry doesn’t seem to have any ambition and feels like a lifeless doll who just does everything Tom wants. There are almost no interactions between Harry and other people. This can all be attributed to his past and his problems with his soul and stuff, but its just a boring read. It also seems that author is trying to follow the plot closely and is almost changing nothing. Some parts of the story seem missing.
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I dont think its good. 9 chapters in and the mc has no personality at all and also no goal at all. Her powers are as bland as can be. The training arc was also just a year passed and now she’s S rank… Nothing is really good about the story, but if you have nothing to do I quess you could check it out.
- HankTheFisherMan2mthCommenté'Oh my god... she had an orgasm'.
- HankTheFisherMan2mthCommenté"Hum hum~ Ray-chan, want to have a taste of mommy?"
- HankTheFisherMan2mthCommenté
The story is getting worse and worse
This was not entirely true, she could pick up combat experience and learn how to properly use her skills in combat but leveling them up would be a long shot. Not with the limitations imposed on her by the system. She could practice something till Level 0 to 2 or 3 and then her progress would be slowed down considerably. Then, her only choice would be to gather cards to level up her skills. - HankTheFisherMan2mthCommenté
Alarm clock…
"Mom, why did you let Lisa wake me up so late?" Vin asked venomously from across the table, as she sat down and sipped at her own coffee. - HankTheFisherMan6mthCommenté
With how strong he is getting money doesnt even matter anymore…
Whenever he was about to lose his control and cut that prince apart, the hefty money Egone offered him, stopped him from doing that. The only thing that made him happy in those hellish times except his status improvement was his savings of 630 gold coins, 325 silver pieces, and 57 copper pieces. - HankTheFisherMan7mthCommenté
😐
Chapter 07 - Joining the Hestia Family! - HankTheFisherMan7mthCommenté
If u dont want to do them them just don’t. Its your story and if you let someone else write on it its not entirely yours anymore or something.
The other thing I will like to talk about is the lemon chapters I don't like doing them and I don't feel comfortable doing them but my editor fish used to write erotica hence if you whoud like lemon chapters do vote so I can make my unpaid intern start working on them. - HankTheFisherMan7mthCommenté
This can be done, but I’d like it to be the story of the mc. So also things of the perspective of the female lead but not 50/50. Id like it to be 70/30 or 80/20.
Option 1 as the female lead is being introduced in chapter 40 or so ,We follow both the female lead and the Mc the story will be interlinked and will reflect each other like two sides of a coin, this option will make the novel be about 250 to 300 chapters - HankTheFisherMan8mthCommenté
1 letter less….
"Then I'll name you Arlos. It was the name I had in my previous life and in this life I'll give it to you" - HankTheFisherMan9mthCommenté
This is the whole thing where the gamer system comes in. Be OP in everything you do.
"Am I just really untalented with Eldritch magic?" I asked as I struggled to create a portal to the Arctic with the sling ring on my finger. I briefly got to see a glimpse of the frozen tundra before the whole thing collapsed pathetically. I had yet to make a stable portal that lasted more than a few seconds. Needless to say, I sucked. This magic was a lot more difficult to learn than Angel Magic was. - HankTheFisherMan9mthCommenté
The mc is really stupid… She is weak for now and when ur weak the greatest strength u can have is knowledge. But she is just giving it all away for free.. And why doesn’t she just train. She has the most op system ever where with a couple weeks of training u can be OP….
Ch 13 Chapter: 13 - HankTheFisherMan9mthPosté
Haven’t read the story, but if I could give u a tip I would make a better synopsis. Neither the title nor the synopsis gives me any idea what to expect of the story. All I have are the tags wich don’t help much.
Ce livre a été supprimé. - HankTheFisherMan9mthCommenté
Sounds like something u have to sacrifice a lot of virgins for.
"..." Alexander was silent; he had the same feeling of nostalgia that the woman has. As a human who gained eternal youth, he too had to go through many difficult farewells. - HankTheFisherMan9mthRépondu à oppaidaisuke_69
Maybe just direct sunlight
Violet smiled gently. "They turn to ashes." - HankTheFisherMan9mthRépondu à void_ouroboros
Lets try it out… U first! U hit 10 times and I 3 and see who bleeds.
Curled up in a corner, Jacob cried like never before as the blood from his bruised knuckles stained his clothes and the floor. Today, the little love that remained in his heart had been torn away from him. - HankTheFisherMan9mthRépondu à Lazy_Fox111