"It's been quite a journey, but after a lot of rewriting, I'm excited to share one thing with you. I've rewritten this book and given it a new title: 'Second Act: My New Life With a System.' If you're interested, I'd love for you to take a read and let me know what you think. Your feedback means a lot to me."

Yeah, that's the thing, he was just too naive. Nice to see someone picking up on that. Indeed, it was a self-inflicted tragedy.

Hey, appreciate the feedback! About what you mentioned, I'm gonna stick with those dashes—I've had them in my toolkit for a while now. Hope it grows on you. Big thanks for the input. If there's anything else you reckon could use a tweak, drop it my way. Always up for refining the craft. Cheers! 📝✌️

So, is that an invite? Interesting.

I brought him up earlier in this chapter. He's one of Gavin's lackeys.

Hey, thanks a bunch for the feedback! I totally get that the style might not be everyone's cup of tea, but it's the kind of writing I vibe with and feel comfortable in. Still, I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.

Big thanks for the golden ticket, WesternGod! It totally made my day. Appreciate it a ton!

Poor Richard

I'd like to express my heartfelt gratitude to all of you who have generously supported me with your power stone. A special thanks to Gabriel_Henrique_8729, who has been supporting me since the beginning. Also, I'd like to thank Nicholas_Wygle for the three power stones and jotape_do_morro for one power stone. I hope y'all keep supporting me

This chapter was truly challenging to write, as I had to put one of my beloved characters through the wringer. Yet, I couldn't help but enjoy every moment of it, exploring a style I'm not used. Hope y'all liked it as much as I did.

Hey, guys, shameless author here. This story is the one I've liked the most to write, I know you guys will have fun if you give this a shot. The mc is hot-blooded, have a cheat, but not in a system style.

This is not the original work. You should look out for the book with the same name, but it's written by Ming Yu. You'll probably find.

The world-building is really fascinating, and the mc has personality, different from those dumb headed ones. It's a fantastic reading, I've been enjoying reading it.

The prologue really surprised me, it's really well written, and the secondary char seems to be really charismatic. I'll surely keep reading, so keep it up, author-san.

Well, it took like 2 hours to get one, but I used: Blond girl, classroom, sunrise, anime.

I think it's called Dall-E.

But the arm is self-made, that's why isn't as good as the rest.

Nop, I've used an A.I. to do it.

Lee pov of Jesse (Ignore her arm and hand, I struggled with it.

Jesse picture (Ignore her arm, I struggled with it)