Wasilisk100

Fixed it.

Well, just take your time. Although, this is a matter for all beginners. And it's not that I was a great author myself, but I started out about the same way. I just didn't post this on the webnovell, leaving it for the Russian audience... I hope the translator got my speech right.

Thanks for the comment. When I arrive after work, I'll fix it right away. Either I accidentally deleted the continuation of the phrase at the moment of editing, or the translator messed up and ate some text. Thanks again for your vigilance! After all, such simple mistakes prevent immersion in this work.

Events are moving too fast. Therefore, the text seems a little crumpled, as if you are afraid to forget what you want to embody in this idea and try to write the text from the picture that stands in your head as soon as possible. But, in principle, it was good[img= горжусь]

Thanks, I fixed it. Apparently, having written the name by ear, I took it a little wrong)

I would be happy if you could continue to think in this way:) Dreams-dreams...

And I wrote Kimura, right? Damn, I must have confused it with another character from another fandom. Due to work, it will take me a day and a half to get home, so please wait...:)