Zomkiler

I‘m loving the book, usually the newer books would have interesting concepts but trash dialogue but you dont have this problem. Sad you went premium though 😭😭😭

Ashton(MC) seems like a puppet a, pawn in someones game, already on a predestined path. like with the system telling him he’ll have to figure certain information out by himself, choosing not to tell him, that by it self would be ok as other system novels do it with ‘??????’ but the system is clearly sentient as it makes jokes in identify description and talks, so there is no reason for ashton not to know that the system could help. like if the system told him it could help him but there would be rewards if Ashton did it by himself that would make more sense or Ashton wouldn’t find out sooner and didnt have a sentient system and so didn’t know cause he didnt ask. And the reason i said he seems like hes on a predestined path is because in the begginer gift package it says give the badge to a specific agent and say specific things. what would of happened if he said something different or gave it to a different person? also the system said the Ashton was faster than expected like who is expecting this from him, it’s clearly someone as it didn’t say faster than someone with your talent or faster than average person. and finally the bot upgrade thing like it said just give it to jeff he’ll know what to do with it,like no information like thats it’s something that a civilization in a galaxy far away used for their trash bots,but nothing. Like as the system rewards seem to be stuff from his world like the money and stuff it would be better if the description just said something like ” Upgrade module used for robots created by ‘BLANK’ typically used by the federation to upgrade combat robots. alright if you read this far thanks i just find these very annoying.

how does every always know his spirit roots specific grade without test or anything? Just one look is enough to know?

I really like this novel, the only complaint i have is that the dialogue is somewhat awkward (ex: chapter 37) but other than that i recommend this book.( only read up to chapter 37)

Can anyone recommend some novels like this where mc’s cheat is immortality, another similar novel is “As An Immortal, Only I Learn Forbidden Skills”

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*sigh* Why did you have to put a classic traumatic past and why did you have mc telling his business to people who just met and he's not even experienced it he saw these memories from a movie and the mc clearly didn't like him like all he did was draw more attention to himself

this reminded me of GTA IV Bank Robbery

#CHEESY

he slipped up. he didn't go in CDC to meet the doctor