I will return to this sometime next month

Thank you a lot for your review. And yeah that was basically my goal, writing a character like Calamitas from Soundless death was definitely the highlight of last year for me, but now I'm trying a different approach, and approach where Vita, the main character, does things on a whim while using maths in the story was definitely a hard choice, but it was fun so I added it.

I hope you liked it :)

This story is absolutely great, do you want great dialogues ? Check Great characters? Check You want a lively world and great world building? Check too For anyone reading this, read it, it is one of the best beginnings to a novel !!!

The plot is great, but that's not the best thing about it... THE AUTHOR IS AN ABSOLUTE LEGEND WHEN IT COMES TO COLD LINES, you would be reading and BOOM, A SUPER COLD LIKE DROPPED AND JUST LIKE THAT YOU ARE NOW EXCITED TO READ WHAT'S NEXT, the description is great too. Overall a great read.

THANKS A LOT FOR THIS REVIEW AND I WILL WORK HARD ENOUGH TO LIVE UP TO UR EXPECTATIONS!!

Hey, if you like this first chapter I hope you vote add to your library and write a comment cuz it helps a lot !!

Thanks you so much, I did my best and I will try to live up to your expectations about the series :)

THE STORY IS MAGNIFICENT I mean the way you wrote all the chapters was weird and bizarre but like in a good way It was as if I was watching a movie And my favorite chapter is the 4th I mean the confusion in that chapter and the way you show the mc's powers were fantastic I can't even understand how are you so good at describing I literally pictured the scenes in my head and it was quite frightening to be honest

Thanks for pointing out the issue,. I'll work on it :)

Thanks youu

I rewrote the first chapters, so can you tell me your opinion about them?

Thank you so much, I will try and work on it and uptade it.

Achraf knows nothing about the mess in Flavio's head, that's why he considers his reactions sudden and weird.

This chapter was mainly focusing on Flavio's paranoid.

The name is : How to Become an Apex Being

Sure 😁

Thank you for the support 😊

OK, Thanks 👍, I will see about that later on.

Ohh and just for the record what he used wasn't really magic. It was something lighter and way easier