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I used inbuilt apple translator, and you know what? Text is completely the same as what you translated. I have attached screenshots proving this under my review. Stop scamming people for money😐 Stop scamming people for money Stop scamming people for money Stop scamming people for money Stop scamming people for money Stop scamming people for money
The writing quality improved, but the content has become much dumber. MCs personality is disgusting, coupled with the fact that you keep mentioning his uncontrollable erection every time he comes into contact with the heroines.… It’s really disappointing, your novel with scumbag in its name was much better.
It’s not a punishment lol
Protagonists family already has enough gold, there is no point in earning more. Also, use your brain and try to understand MCs goal in his second life. He was only 15 years before crossing and now he only studied theory for beginners without much practice, so it’s basically impossible to create magic. Mc has no system or cheats expect his reborn soul, what else you expected? Story is based and quite logical, it’s not about your avarage Japanese oayash
Free part was okay cause it was the beginning, abut ch 140 author exposed true face of this novel. Forgotten cultivation realms mixed with shit called divinity, power levels are at least messed up. What’s going on with that death god bullshit copied from solo leveling ? Also, path of the god and cultivation are two different ways, why it’s possible to have them in the same time ? Cultivation was simply forgotten, mc manages to defeat protagonists only by virtue of the plot armor. Author wanted to create a domineering mc that hunts protagonist only relying on absolute power, yet again all I see is plot armor. Too much pathos, mcs interactions with heroines are also bullshit. Author should clearly point the reason for heroines irrational behavior and explain it from the MCs perspective, otherwise it only becomes closer and closer to the term trash.
Your new story is very very similar to this one - “Life As Hikigaya Hachiman“. This is 1 star review I gave it, I believe that it also corresponds to your fic. “Too rushed, too forced. I got that this is a world of anime, but even so mc’s actions and mainly behavior are unrealistic. It’s surreal to get into a new body, without any memories in your head, and instantly adapt. Accept the fact that you have a sister and etc. Mc woke up in a new body, went cocking while chatting with his “new” sister like nothing and after immediately went writing novel from his old world. Like wtf is happening. I won’t dive any dipper, i think inf above is enough. Speaking about ch, they are too short. 2ch are equal to 1.” To add more, your mc is degenerate. Degenerates were popular years ago, now is era of out of ordinary main characters. Example- real Villain.
After 186 it became repetitive, mc is already on the same level with new/old gods and can’t find any opponents. So, we got useless characters like hawkgirl and etc taking screen time for chapters only to wait for mc’s one punch. Can’t recommend it any longer.
Thanks god it won’t be able for to fly