boxessssss

Russian mythology/folklore character, don't know much on the actual stories but I'm 90% sure baba yaga wasn't actually a vampire in the original tales

Didn't consider that. maybe so?

Okay this chapter needs to be brought into the volume 1 so people can read it first cause otherwise the "contract" comment in the next chapter makes no sense

*pedal

Them should be us if your using first person

*dont

"The respected" to "their respective"

That would be unorthodox not orthodox. Orthodox is the ""normal" way of doing things" meaning the typical boxing guard sitting high and protecting the head while using your body mostly to take hits you can't dodge. In martial arts it could also mean a right handed fighter (thus left foot, left jab leading) where unorthodox can be southpaw (lefties essentially fight as a literal mirror to righties (meaning right foot, right jab)

"To him" to "to me"

"Her back" to "her bag" or "her backpack"