Only_Hare

Writing quality 4 stars not perfect but pretty close. Updates 5 stars once a day as far as I can tell. Story development 2 stars the fates literally appear in his room and tell him he is not allowed to change canon and he agrees. Character design 2 stars I don't like that his hair/snakes are sentient it just feels weird like multiple people sharing the same body not to mention that he has multiple forms wouldn't mind if he was a monster or a human but he is a hybrid that is half human half monster with the ability to turn into a different full monster or a human like version of that monster like pick one or two having too many will get confusing. World background 5 stars it is a fanfic world background is already established.

This is the second time he has asked this in like 5 seconds. Instead of making him ask twice just answer the first time.

Not what I was expecting. I kinda thought that since they were a part of him he would be able to control them like additional limbs. Its kinda weird that they have their own conscious its like multiple people sharing his body.

I mean the average person can do a 100 meter sprint in 15-18 seconds according to google. So 5.6 m/s would be like 17 seconds or so. If he doesn't have any sort of stamina and can run infinitely or until he is hungry it would still be quite broken its like infinite full speed running for the average person.

I would like to say you make a point but the MC isn't a Nomu he is a seemingly normal kid.

There is also the New Moon its not weird to not be able to see the moon sometimes.

I think that since this is an English novel it would make more sense to have it in English. Also I'm not familiar with the Japanese names so if they are going to be used it would confuse me and I will have to look at the comments to figure out what they are talking about.

Google says that 3% of the worlds population is homosexual so technically being straight is normal. I would like to point out that I have nothing against homosexuals just stating facts.

Love the story my favorite Borderlands Fanfic. Love the siren power has great potential. Wish it was updated more frequently though there is a new chapter about every 3 days.

Every time the author uses ED now i'm gonna think of this.