Junasity

I read the published version of this at home since you showed me years ago. It is a good story, however, it was short for me and I know you would do better in this story if you made it longer. Considering that this is fantasy, it is amazing you made it so short but it would be more awesome if you made a lot of chapters for this. But I understand since the contest where you joined this in was short stories only. I hope you would make this into a novel soon? What do you think?

Yes, this is the cringe-worthy story you made back when you were in high school with the TagLish popularity in stories. Will give 4 in everything except update stability because this story is finished and you only posted what you wrote when you were younger. I am expecting more from your newly written English stories.

This is the story you made when you were in high school I recall. Writing quality is 4 since you upgraded it and only translated it in English. Since the story is done, update stability is 5. Story development is great, but character and world background is something not yet much shaped because this is something you did as a younger person. Keep up the good work.

You told me to leave a review on everything, so why not. It's funny that you made a poem here dedicated to... you know what I mean. Hahaha! 5 star rating since this is anyway, a compilation of randomness and poems.

Another great fantasy story from my niece. Great job! Knowing your writing quality, it is very good but I implore you to use great vocabs. I am not familiar of what a harem is but searching it on net it is good. I read this based on the chapters you read me before you posted the story and it is very interesting. It is something unique to the usual novels that I read. Very good! Keep it up.

One of your best stories I read. Quality is good with a unique creature which is the Soul Eater. Not your usual fantasy romance which is a good thing. Update is good. Story, character, and world background is amazing. Keep it up!