KaitheSovereign

Just proves yellow cinnamon roll behavior makes everyone not want to be evil

That’s why I gave it a three In a half but I also wasn’t a fan of how catwoman was acting with him if she was a “family friend” regardless I said I would change my review after theirs 30+ chapters and I will when it gets to that point if it gets worse I won’t make the score any lower I’ll leave it as is If it gets better I’ll raise it depending on how I like it. Do I fully agree giving bomb reviews? Not exactly it’s why I gave it at least a three and a half. I pointed out that I wasn’t a fan of the decision but at the end of the day it’s the writers decision. I will wait till it gets more chapters before I read it again.

I can’t in my right mind give it more then what I did, it’s a story with ghost rider in the picture and yet getting jumped by the league once he loses all his powers, it was hype when I was like ‘man Possible ghost rider with red and yellow rings would be busted.’ But then we get “plot armor Batman and justice league takes his powers.” The story started well enough but then it slowly took a dive with each chapter, firstly trusting catwoman even if she was a family friend that was a no no, plus catwoman was made out to be well… flirtatious as she is she has tact she wouldn’t be all over him after his family just died. So while it’s not bad, it’s going down a slope I can’t keep reading I may give it another chance when their is 30+ chapters to see what happens but taking the powers that quickly didn’t sit right. As much as a yellow ring is ok it’s a massive downgrade from ghost rider

That suicide squad anime ruined me anytime I see Harley in a fanfic now that’s the Harley that pops up in imagination it’s such a good design! Ugh but I like og Harley to from the animated series

Or well 10 years older but still

It’s a good story a few dings here and their but I think it’s more so due to google translating being not very good at times. So I didn’t give review perfect five. Also I feel it completely knowing how stressful a story is to write especially when you have lots of ideas you want but don’t know what to do first. I think this story has a lot of potential truly I’m not sure late game dxd how strong he will be compared to the things like the Exe gods or trihexa but at the same time I want to see reactions from the angels when he uses his weapons that will be fun Overall, Good story, Good concept not many mix the two worlds and if they do they go overboard and put in 4+ other worlds, I’m not even mad about updates because truly it’s stressful to update constantly. So continue to do your best.

Ironic since in the Pokemon electric tales he has four blastoise, A wartortle and a squirtle on top of his dodrio

I would give this a perfect five but their are minor things that irk me a bit and of course their more of nitpicks then actual judgements. A bit of the history and the characters are a bit flawed the clock tower explanation is a bit off but the biggest one is the use of how they refer to Homunculus as Androids Androids do exist in lore I believe but their used in different name. Golems, constructs, living Dolls. But calling Einzbern Android just irks me. It would almost be like calling Mordred and Android to. Android Sounds mechanical in nature while homunculus is biological.

I’ll be honest in my mind their are more Neko waifus then I can only name a few elf waifu (That I like) Fiel (No game no life) Shera Greenwood Eina Tulle Tuka Luna Marceau High elf (Goblin slayer) Aura Shurifon Ryu Lion Alpha, Beta, Gamma (Eminece of shadow) Lupine (kings raid) That’s about it. I’m not a fan of Freiren, I don’t really like Emilia, I don’t really like Riveria or Lefiya. While I like mare from overlord she isn’t really a waifu to me so I have a tiny list but then I like more Nekos nekopara alone out paces my elf list