Olethros_Mania

Too idealistic for to be honest. I like the idea of the story but the it was portrayed was kind of off to me. There was like no repercussions or enemies or even a little bit of confrontation against a decision that will impact a lot of lives. To important characters like Hiruzen or Danzo to Konoha their passivity was off in regards to their personality(Specially Danzo who "does everything for Konoho" control freak)

A very great book I can't even describe it properly. The quality is superb, word count for a chapter is large, grammar is great. Overall the story is amazing. I just wish the updates would come faster(not realistic as the quality would maybe drop). I WANT TO READ MORE!

This is my opinion, feel free to do or react as you like🙂 The writing quality is good but the sequence or flow of the story does is not that good. One moment the MC is doing this then like 3 chapters later it's different. It's like the story or fanfic is just like different arcs that are compressed in a few chapters...

The story is not that descriptive, if anything is more a draft of the major actions of the MC, the progression of the story is too fast in my opinion but it's still good...

Personally this fanfic does not suit me... the stories like about the beginning of Orario and more like a summary of the story? I guess... I don't know if I recomend this to others but that's just me being bias...

Newbie Reader desu~~~ A very good Naruto fanfic. Would recommend to read. Please continue the story please

Hello newbie reader here... for now (chapter eight )the story is really great... This is my own opinion, the story gives a "different" explanation or system for sealing jutsu that is different from the other fanfics... Will update or edit this review in the future along the chapters...PLEASE DON'T GET MAD, as I am waiting for the event or world background... PLEASE CONTINUE BEING THIS AWESOME FANFIC...

Thank you for the chapter. Please keep on updating

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