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I thought there were no windows in this thing 🙄
Ugh this story is so lame 🤣. I’d rather she didn’t fall for the cliche prince and just get revenge 🙄
*steal the money
It is ”bottom”, it is a singular noun. The grammar of this whole sentence is bad.
Yesss go for Luke go for Luke!
Isn’t it her mothers birthday? Not her birthday party?
Not Leo! He’ s so BORING
I hope she doesn’t go with Leon. He’s ok but super boring
Who wrote this garbage? ”woman parts?”… 🗑
indolent 9 times now. whyyy writer? whyyyy
indolence...8[img=faceslap]
indolent again... 7 counts. my eyes!
need to find a new adjective besides indolent. it is pretty over used already and it is obvious for the reader because of how overused it is.
This character Development is trash
Right? Just saying period drama means nothing to the reader
The writing is confusing and not a lot of background on characters. i stopped after the 3rd chapter because it was so confusing that I got bored.the main character seems to be not very intelligent and barely has any original thoughts. as a reader i dont care about her so if she died i would be ok with it. i gIve this story 1 star. and thats being generous .
I think the fIrst few chapters should be reworded. The time lines are confusing. Like her running the cabin and then her having no Idea how she got to tHe cabin? also there is no character development That Shows faye and her get closer but suddenly it says they do? The idea of this story is interesting but the writing is bad and needs to be planned out more