Canadian writer boi, just trying to write and chill. If you like what I do and have a lot of cash check out my patreon because I’m a shill! https://www.patreon.com/Hendinklette
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The story may slow down from here idk
I never was able to get into this genre of story, but i found the plot and characters very engaging. Your writing style is interesting and I've yet to find any pace stumping grammatical errors. A great read!
Much more is coming soon!!
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More chapters soon!
How dare I Forget the bacon... i will surely find a place for it in the upcoming chapters
Keep on reading!
Thanks for your time and thoughts, I was just wondering what you think my characters are missing? Is there anything in specific you think I should inflate them with??? Thank you again for your critique!
Also don’t stop improving!
Found this book and have a facsination with the characters and story... Writing and grammer could use some work including the flow of paragraph structure, but i hope you continue working on it and eventually get to a point where you have a Real following!!! Good luck And keep writing