Tom_Rommel

the last would in the paragraph is unnecessary

below awerage fiction even for this site - grammar mistakes - point of view problems - no characterisation + the thing with core levels is interesting

As far as Xiangxia stories go this is one of the better ones. The MC in not running around slapping people because they don t give him face which is already a huge positive. However the story is as expected full with profound gazes and one dimensional sidecharacters that are constantly shocked that such a unfairly talented an overpowered person such as the MC even exists. Overall it is a nice change of pace from classic xiangxia exen if it is a bit boring because there is no real struggle.

The story is horrible. The grammar is written in sms format. The backstory is cliche. The MC is a clichee overpowered character but i would use the word character loosely because he has no personality, he is like a doll. Finally, the elements from other stories make no sense and are poorly explained.

The premise is intresting, that is to say zo have an MC who is not a goody two shoes. However it is written like a bad wuixia fic. The grammar and sythax is all over the place that make the story difficult to understand. Furthermore the story itself makes little sense, like a 9 year old beginning to build an army or deciding a person born a week ago is useless. In conclusion I would say this story is for those that expltored all other options of better quality and have time to burn with nothing better to do