OneFellSwoop

Well, yes, sort of....

Natha still has some teaching to do. Leaving enemies behind?? Tsk tsk.

Yeah, we know. A 26 word-count cut and paste. Could be worse, I guess.

I'm all for OneFellSwoop-ing in general, but not by wild Beasts....

Kinda slow and sweet so far, with just a hint or two of coming darkness. Just four chapters so far, but I'll be happy to read more. MC actually has a happy childhood with a complete and loving family - how odd. Sure, it's a tad cliche so far, but I still enjoy a 'growing into power' story. Best of luck to the author on this new endeavor.

Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to more.

Author, stick with either first or third person. No switching within a sentence, please.

I think that should be 'reverent,' unless you really meant 'raised from the dead'...

Good thing he took off his glasses, I guess.

People, get real. Gu is only going to save himself.