OSalted_Fish
My dream is to be the biggest salted fish
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who said this ? cliffhanger ...
I read it till 110 chapters in MTL, it's not bad, definitely better than most MTL novels. MC will do some crazy stuff just before and during Chunin exam. i won't spoil it. re-reading it here is better experience than MTL, i recommend people to read here instead of MTL which will make you feel tired after few chaps, i skipped a lot of action parts because of it was in MTL. Hey translator, i suggest skipping some parts which are there to just increase word count and add nothing to the story such as long list of his skills most of which rarely get used more than twice, training text which feels useless or maybe it's just me and others like to read those things
surtur's crown shouldn't be there now. Thor defeated him in future and put his head in treasury
MC is 21 but acts like a 13 year old who hasn't seen a girl before. and Ms Justice (Audrey) is very different in this fanfic. there are also some issues such as 1. dark emperor card is a bookmark, you also need a password to turn normal bookmark into card of blasphemy 2. I can't believe Hall family would agree marriage with a family that's going down. (before MC took over body of that guy) I know this is a fanfic and I don't expect it to be one the level novel. but at least keep characters as they are...
she shouldn't act like this, she should have learnt stuff in etiquette class
??? it was a ordinary bookmark, Ms Justice even poked it with something to see if it's special. password for it is Roselle's daughters name
he still wanna go back ... I'm disappointed. mc is strong enough to kill people under kage with kamui. if I were him I'd slaughter sarutobi .shimura clans by hiding my identity, if I want to help Uchiha I'll tell leader what I'm gonna do and if he doesn't want to become enemy of someone who can slaughter multiple clans inside konoha's safety. use threats or reason to make him obey me. i really don't understand why MC wanna be konoha's dog when he can control konoha
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