Amazing you can do it. My encouragement and well wishes to you the story development is nice so far nice improvements#######################)#####################################################################################$$###$$$#$####

patience my Dear princess patience you find out sooner or later (chuckling)

ahh what a disappointment

aaaahhh seriously just one chapter

seriously

ahhhh poor thing

nice

ahhhh seriously try and write more chapters I just love the way gave and evie are

a secret uhh something is fishy why do I have a feeling he is up to no good