Jade_F

I have thoroughly enjoyed this book although in parts the editing needs to be looked at again. Chapter 322 refers to lady Destia but changes her name to Deborah multiple times. It interrupts the flow as you end up reading the section again trying to work out who the 'new' character is

I haven't got far into this book but its difficult to read as there is no punctuation when characters are speaking. Everything is on one line with no spacing, it's one continuous sentence so you find yourself having to back an read again to follow the story properly.

Started reading this after I began beasts of men and so far I'm not disappointed. Its only 5 chapters in but I'm already eagerly awaiting the next update and I can't wait to see how the story progresses.

This is such a good story so far and I'm patiently waiting for the next update and hoping that this doesn't get left partially finished as it's been a few weeks since the last update