graygam
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This is a bit late and perhaps you already have one, but Im looking to become an editor and am an English major. Editing for you would be great practice with the added bonus of your amazing writing.
I’ve only read the first chapter so Im not exactly wualified to give a detailed review, but just wanted to give my first impression. overall the storry seems white interesting and the characters intriguing and overall unique, but either the execution or the translation is ruining it for me. too often are the character’s names mentioned so it doesn’t read as smooth as it could be. Other than that, keep up the good work!
The quality is pretty good, definetly great wuality for how fast artists are expected to profuce comics. The development is a bit fast- which is rather surprising for me to say. Overall I think it’s well done and executed, but could perhaps need more of a focus... As for character development the male leads seem to be generally the types you see in any book/comic like this. Unfortunatly not too original, but still well done.