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OR_143

OR_143

Lv1
2020-10-07 JointCanada
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  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Commenté

    I look forward to seeing all the new chapters coming out for the New Year! Definitely an inspiration for other authors, such as myself who also has lost track of their own writing schedule :’D. Best wishs for a safe holiday, and a productive new year!!

    Ch 6 December 20 2020
    altalt
    Moes bombonxiouse life
    Urbain · Outofcontrolmoe
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  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Commenté

    The development of this story iS subtle and realistic, which is a great skill for the reader to perfect. It’ll be great to see this character develope as the story proceeds.

    Ch 2 The Big City
    altalt
    The pursuit of desire
    Fantaisie · Outofcontrolmoe
    detail
  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Commenté

    It's so calming to read about what others do during their day, and how we all share similat experiences and memories. I look forward to your next entry!❤!

    Ch 4 It’s a terrible day for rain
    altalt
    Moes bombonxiouse life
    Urbain · Outofcontrolmoe
    detail
  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Commenté

    The author displays potential for a solid story line, focused mainly on character development. Though its evident this author is new to writing in this format, theres lots of room for improvement and success.

    Ch 1 Prologue, the separation
    altalt
    The pursuit of desire
    Fantaisie · Outofcontrolmoe
    detail
  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Commenté

    5 exams! My heart goes out to the author. Hopefully you can keep us updated in the close future, while still balancing your academics!

    Ch 3 Bonfire
    altalt
    Moes bombonxiouse life
    Urbain · Outofcontrolmoe
    detail
  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Commenté

    Nicu Nicu, I look forward to living your life with you deska!

    Ch 2 Hoooo I did not expect this
    altalt
    Moes bombonxiouse life
    Urbain · Outofcontrolmoe
    detail
  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Posté

    Beautiful writing ability. Lots of potential for growth and strong character designs! Look forward to expansion on what seems to be an immaculate beginning.

    altalt
    Moes bombonxiouse life
    Urbain · Outofcontrolmoe
    detail
  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Commenté

    DELECTABLE!! ABSOLUTELY IMMACULATE!

    Ch 1 My bombunxiality be popin
    altalt
    Moes bombonxiouse life
    Urbain · Outofcontrolmoe
    detail
  • OR_143
    OR_1433yr
    Répondu à Outofcontrolmoe

    Thank you very much, this GRAPE novel will be continued hopefully every Friday/Monday!

    Ch 1 The Encounter
    altalt
    Tea?
    LGBT+ · OR_143
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