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ASKeeling

ASKeeling

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I am an aspiring author and a father. I write to share my passion with as many people as I can. Discord: https://discord.com/invite/ek4fkRw9eS

2020-10-09 JointUnited States
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling5d
    Répondu à Ares_322

    well, that was mean!

    Sheree writhed and moaned in ecstasy as Elliot's lips worked their way down her neck. She was lying in his bed pinned beneath him as he punished her with his mouth. He had her arms trapped above her head, held tight in the powerful grip of his left hand. His right hand pinched the stiff nipple of her left breast as his mouth slowly approached.
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling6d
    Répondu à ApproachingStorm

    I really wish there was some kind of notification when people left comments. I miss so many of these. Sorry for the late reply, that is the reason. Thank you for the well thought out comment as well. I actually do understand your point of view on this matter. I just don't agree with it. Let's view it from the self-insert point of view even. If I envision myself as the ML of a story, why would I want to be shackled to a FL that doesn't want me? If I wrote that version of the story it would bother me, and I'm sure a few others that picked up on it. I could have also simply not made her care if she could get stronger with other people. That too is limiting because it takes away a part of who the FL is. She isn't the type of person to just do something without a reason, even if that reason is one that others won't always like. So, that is the majority of the reasoning behind the choice. What we are left with is a fully informed FL who truly loves the ML. She denied it and ran from it briefly but in the end, she accepted and embraced it. I would much rather be the guy with that girlfriend than the guy whose girlfriend is only with him out of obligation or need.

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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling12d
    Répondu à Lewis_Cooper_9575

    there will be after this weekend lol

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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling13d
    Répondu à Lewis_Cooper_9575

    im surprised you dont go for the advanced chapters

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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling23d
    Répondu à RagingMutant

    she also had no interest in dating him. she was purely doing it as a way to test her powers. did I not spell that out?

    "I'm free today," she said and shattered Elliot's entire world. " Just give me time to change and shower."
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling25d
    Répondu à Smedzz

    That's a good question

    Elliot walked into the woods with a newfound sense of urgency. Sheree was close, and she was alone. With every step he took, he scanned the area to his right and his left. He found nothing but undisturbed foliage on either side. He still felt her somewhere nearby, and that was all he needed to keep walking. 
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à foodball23

    if you do check out those advanced chapters there should be more added either today or tomorrow. not trying to entice you at all though lol

    Ch 57 56. The search
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à foodball23

    i post once a week to give myself time to write as well as handle other responsibilities i have. The advaced chapters are there to purchase though.

    Ch 57 56. The search
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à Lewis_Cooper_9575

    lol ok I'll stop mentioning it then

    "Stop bringing that up like I knew what the fuck was going on," Rayne said. Her voice was a mixture of defensiveness and irritation.
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à Lewis_Cooper_9575

    They were there for a different reason

    Ch 58 57. Recon
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à Bk_Vybez

    This comment was getting taken seriously until the person leaving it decided to become a sexist. I'm a man though, thanks for reading!

    "I desperately need to have an orgasm," Sheree said in his ear. For emphasis she bit his earlobe when she was done speaking.
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à Bob_Saunders

    Yeah she was

    Sheree writhed and moaned in ecstasy as Elliot's lips worked their way down her neck. She was lying in his bed pinned beneath him as he punished her with his mouth. He had her arms trapped above her head, held tight in the powerful grip of his left hand. His right hand pinched the stiff nipple of her left breast as his mouth slowly approached.
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à James_Bell_6276

    lol thanks for catching that!

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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à manqobadlamini17

    He's a pacific islander. so he's a boy from an island lol

    As she moved through the room getting ready he wanted to ask her to stay, but he knew she wouldn't. He wasn't the begging type anyway. If she wanted to run off with "Island boy" he wouldn't try to stop her.
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à Mimi729

    thanks its nice to see that scene again lol

    He looked around and realized they were hovering about 12 feet off the ground. He hugged closer to Sheree.
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à Mimi729

    aww i was thinking more the scene from the old Casper movie.

    He looked around and realized they were hovering about 12 feet off the ground. He hugged closer to Sheree.
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à Mimi729

    lol that's the image i was trying to display with words. images are so cool.

    He looked around and realized they were hovering about 12 feet off the ground. He hugged closer to Sheree.
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling1mth
    Répondu à RemoWilliams

    i just saw this thank you so much!

    Ch 56 55. Illumination
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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling2mth
    Répondu à Lewis_Cooper_9575

    Lol you don't like brooding Albert?

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  • ASKeeling
    ASKeeling2mth
    Répondu à Athea_Evure

    lol if that's too much its gonna be a long read

    "No, I couldn't let that dumb cat eat you. That's my job," Elliot said and gave a slow, exhausted wink.
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