QATCOD

Really liked the opening and how the story is unfolding the first chapter's characters introduction was really good and liked the story along with the character and the world's background

It seems good and promising liked the starting and hope the story will get more interesting as it goes well there's always room for improvement

Jinsang

Well I really don't mind criticisms cause I know that they are due to my own lack of writing skills. And I will improve the earlier chapters I was not able to write because of my exams. Doo now I will rewrite my chapters.

It'll get better after some chapters.

Actually these chapters will be rewritten after 20 or 30 chapters.

They did not live inside the Jin family mansion due to family issues so they were not killed but they were just a minor supporting character so I didn't feel it suitable to make another entrance but they will come back in upcoming chapters.

Well every review is valuable.

I will write it in sometime as I also understand this mistake of mine.

Hmmm, Your advice is good and I had already noticed these kind of problems and they will be resolved after sometime as I will rewrite the story when I reach 100 chapter or when this season will be finished.