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Unfortunately I've never found anything that I can say is good, I always see stories where Ash is betrayed and out of nowhere decides to train to become strong or something like that (which to me is a painfully boring cliché, so I avoid reading it, because then it becomes just a power flexion of ash and ends with a meaningless harem), honestly I look for a story of an IS in Ash during his really competent journey, but I don't think I'll ever find it.
For me the problem of the protagonist is this arrogance that he has, he is not the sukuna, he is considerably strong, but if he appears in the path of those really strong he will not be more than an ant, the arrogance coming from the sukuna is justified, after all he is the most powerful being in his world, besides having 20 fingers that can serve as "reserved lives," the protagonist has a single life, I do not like when the authors make their protagonists lose to teach them a little humility,... but I feel that this should happen for our MC to learn its place in the world
this sounds like something very good, thank you very much for the attention and for accepting the criticism in a good way, there are certain authors on the Webnovel who look like children tantruming when something is contested in your story, I am glad to know that this does not happen to you
I'm sure someone has already explained it or you have discovered it yourself, but noble ghosts can be items that the hero had in life, or the very crystallization of his deeds in life, for example the Excalibur or the spear of Artotia are magical items of immense power that she can use whenever she wants, or the sword of Gawain itself, they have no limited use unless it is explicit that such use is limited in the legend itself, in the Artoria theory could simply shoot several attacks to destroy armies by Excalibur.
the author has already stated that he will rewrite the prologue at some point in the future to warn of the glaring error of strength and ability of the characters, but I also think it important that some other things be changed, such as this story of Artoria, in fact in the universe of Fate nobody in the court of Camelot with the exception of Morgan know the genre of the "King," including this is one of the factors that contributed to the fall of Camelot and the death of all the knights at the time.
Honestly I liked the story, but it's clear that what we're reading is like a diary where the protagonist narrates his life, there's no dialogue, no thoughts or even written interaction, the protagonist simply states that something happened as if he was remembering an old story of his life, honestly I never got a Game of Thrones story that was truly good, but this one had the potential if it was written as a story, and not as a diary of his own. events.
It was one of the reasons I'm having a hard time finding motivations to read the story... before the eighth generation Tyrantum was probably one of the most powerful fossils, besides the coolest, and the MC discards it in favor of the Pokemon with one of the most horrific abilities ever created?