TheNeorav

Thank you for the review my friend!

The story has a good head start with the hero being a mafia boss and the first chapter shows promise that this has the potential to be a good read.

Sure thing man

Mandatory author's shameless 5-star self-appreciation. Well, Well I am back with a new story but this time with a proper plan and plotting. What you can expect: I) A ruthless Main character with a hollow heart (No morals pursued in order to achieve his goal.) II) Vicious schemings III) Intricate world building IV) Steady upload schedule V) Solo (If you like Harem then this ain't for you.) Disadvantages of the book: 1) My first language is not English so expect some grammatical errors. ( I will improve slowly in this dept) 2) I don't know, comment your thoughts on the other flaws you see.

yes will be continuing soon but the story will go through editing (which might potentially reduce the harem influence in the story and focus on only the story) though the plot stays the same. Currently busy with my job so will take time to restart a schedule to publish chapters.

I don't understand what you are asking about? is this about the current chapter? Would be easier if you inserted a context

Currently scheduled 1 chapter per day but will be going for two chaps later on since I am going for a job.

Can you elaborate further? What do you sense dumb?

Grendon is a transcendent and the general of the central continent his brother is the emperor of the central continent.

According to my outline, there are things to appear soon... Just don't want to spoil, it'll be cool