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I have read up to chapter four and I can tell you that so far it's very good the spelling and pacing seems pretty stable I can't see any major flaws. All I can ask for this time is for more chapters to get a better opinion keep up the great work author.

This was a very confusing and not a great chapter I don't know where to go from here be honest I don't I just don't get it this was not it

So far I've read up to chapter 5 which is that all the chapters at this moment in time it is very well written the spelling seems to be okay and I can't really fault anything with how the stories going so far as is a bit too early to tell. One thing I would like is if the spacing of the sentences was a bit wider, at the moment sometimes my eyes glaze over at the wall of text and can be hard to read apart from that author I wish you the best and I will keep an eye on this story and for anyone else I think this is a good read for what there is so far

What an amazing fight I've read so many stories where the character is so much stronger than their opponent or just a bit better but somehow their opponents still went up to them surprises them shocks them and nearly wins and it feels so I don't know cheesy I guess. But this fight was amazing you could feel that the main character was leading Battle Beast through this fight like a dance it was amazing I can't say anymore I can't wait for more this is definitely the best invincible fic that I've read ever author I tip my hat to you.

I love the idea of that power I don't know if that was in the Comics I'm not sure or if you came up with it either way it was an incredible move I can't wait for more

I really like this chapter I think it has a great contrast between the human and alien Minds I really enjoyed it and I really like Conquest can't wait for more

I only got to chapter 14 and 15 writing and spellings good the story is going at a direction I don't like to be honest my biggest problem with it is that someone tries to eat and kill him he saves them for I don't know lust I guess in the story the author goes on about you know if he doesn't save her she will be tortured and stuff well yeah who cares she's killed loads of other people and eat them like I meant to feel something for her if you can get over that and the wonky power levels then you're probably enjoy this story it's just not for me.

The story is decently written the first 30 chapters are okay nothing much majorly happens you know you meet the characters but I'm sorry you picked the smart atoms from invincible and the Baki bloodline and no you saying it's not the full effect doesn't really help much and then let's not get started on the cucking. its just it's a real shame but I'm sure some people will get enjoyment of it

This is so great

A great chapter and I can't wait for more