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I need more chapters 😭 I’m here waiting in class for an update this is torture

So far so good it’s one of the best new gen webnovel I’ve read , it’s funny, adventurous and full of action this webnovel can only be deceive in one phrase “fake it till you make it” 👌 but lease author never drop this I hope other can supports it an amazing webnovel 🎊🎊

Love it the plot, the characters chief kiss 😘

The story and concept is okay but writing is horrible I’m always confuse on who’s talking especially when two character go on a rant about a topic. The details are very lacking we need more background details and I think it would better to just dump the information on the power setting or world seeing instead of having us lost in the story. Because when you mention terms and expect us to know it’s annoying like Valkyrie/ the dolls/ CSS/ISC . The main problem for me it makes my head hurts om trying to understand who’s talking what dialogue maybe I’ll a try again in tomorrow but the story is really interesting

This is really confusing I can’t understand who and who is talking and I’m really confuse on the lack of details after ceaser was sent back to protect the artifact thing . By the way is Mr Yamamoto or is whatever his name is

I like everything about this book and its concept you know how hard it is to find webnovels with elven lore much less and elf main character. Thank you author for bringing this to life 🥹🙏

Please continue to update I’ll be reading it was enjoyable

lol only see ohito pull out his private pacers only to be surprised theirs nothing their except the female ones 😂

Look interesting

Gus was amazing although the mc got too much cheats it was just enjoyable and relaxing