theychimirollin

Awesome work! It's very well-written and the words just take you. The detail and relationships between characters weren't skimped out on. I'm a huge fan of the fight scenes and I've become a fan of the author as well. Kudos and keep it up! :)

Didn't plan on making him that way when I chose the name hahaha

Aye. My willpower was weak too when I wrote this XD

Great job! Celestial beings' interactions with our world always pique my interest. The first chapter was very interesting but as the story went on, and though progressing, it felt a little lost. I hope this comes off as advice to a fellow author but maybe instead of a direct showcase of skills, maybe Liam could be placed in harsher situations where he does learn and use his newfound powers. But maybe that's just me. That said, it was an enjoyable read and it will stay in my collection because I'm curious of Liam's journey and the author's progress as well. You're doing great. Keep it up and keep writing! :)

Aye-oh!

Thank you! I appreciate the advice and I'll definitely do that! I've been planning to spend a day of proofreading the whole novel soon. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me. Even I was caught unaware of how much I liked the characters lol. I hope to do my best writing on. Thank you again! :)

Thank you! Really glad you enoyed it, especially the humor. I usually write fantasy but like Maya on foreign land, this is my first story with comedy as a centered genre. I'll do my best to keep both humor and story going. :)

Nakalibre xD

I couldn't resist xD

Great job! I like the pace and how Travia is more understood as the story goes. Maybe proofreading or reading what you've written aloud could help. There's room for improvement on the technical side but there's a lot of potential in the story. Keep it up and keep writing! :)