The story's pretty dope so far, keep up the good work bro! Its so ironic that Alyx wanted a calm and basic life style, but ended up getting a pretty exciting one. There were some grammatical errors here and there, but they don't affect the clarity of the plot, so no worries.
Alyx watched as Jason strutted into the room. He envied that confidence. He waited patiently, his silent prayer became a mantra he repeated on loop: 'Let me be Incompatible.''
'My name is unimportant, and when you leave here you are to not mention that we talked. As for you Reaper? It's one the world won't be happy to see again, so good luck with that. I hope you had a good life before now, cause it's not gonna be great from here on out...well it's time to go back, Alyx Sorozin, champion of Hades!