joey_thomas

First you're f****** writing is annoying second the story is ass third this is not a story this is just a bunch of words put together badly

Good chapter 👏

Nah

Okay so you tell me that he's winning the fight then they decide to blast my man what

I'm starting to think that people don't understand how strong angels are

This is already good

I don't know if you're writing it or translating it but it's a fanfic if you don't want to waste your time then write a novel

Yeah I'm good he's hiding his power I'm gone

Bro your main characters useless as hell

Not a bad start