Killjoy4Life

My god that was perfect!

This was the culmination of everything right from the beginning and you did not disappoint.

I loved this chapter and how well you wrote his high insanity i could practically feel his confidence.

He not only won he won with style.

I think calling him the gojo of sakamoto days is a bit much, maybe the yuki tsukumo or yuta okkotsu a high end talented combatant with either completely realized or near completely manifested potential but not quite gojo.

Overall not a bad fanfic for how it is written but the number of libertys it takes borders between gary sue and shameless how right everything goes for the mc, but for all this it is still well written I just wouldn't recommend it to anyone that cares about natural development or consistency with the canon version. I am not going to keep reading but I don't regret reading the first 18 chapter this just is not my cup of tea.

That statement physically hurts me.

I think you went a bit overboard with the technology even perturabo had difficulty expanding space with his non- Euclidian geometrics during the horus heresy and it was fitted in konrad curze flagship the idea of them doing that but on a frame of armor is just absurd, otherwise I like how the story is shaping up so far.

Justice for Mogh!

Justice For Mohg!