what a stupid premise for an mc.

he's one of those people, like madonna or cher.

so a batman & superman in the 40’s ?

im sure you have plagiarised this story from somewhere else. ill find the original and post the link here.

writing is good. story line is boring though sorry to say.

what. is it too hard to do multiple things a day like fitness train in the morning and chakra control in between. your writing is too simple.

this story lacks depth & details. its so basic its like being fed bread and water.

this story is incredibly familiar. im pretty sure you did not write this.

why not just have edric start sucking jamies côck already. what a fuçkwit.

mc seems like a retard.

super lame how she also had a building fall on her like spider-man in the previous chapter . then a reporters like also “how do feel”. snoozefest

unless i have forgotten that this is a hogwarts college fiction. hehe

why was pettigrew hiding as a rat for 17 years when sirius had been jailed fir 12 years. it no makea any sense.

why is theon saying he will be lord of iron islands? you had Robert give the wardenship to the lord of orkmont didn’t you. when you sent all the greyjoys to the watch?

thought all the greyjoys went to the wall except for euron(muron)

worm sucks. could never finish an au or crossover. i tried but come on the main character is a bug person. soo stupid.

hehe. these are the same faction names from arasaka in cyberpunk 2077.

author is delusional. humanity likes nothing more than killing each other.

until i found you, steve sanchez and em beihold