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every author does this so sue me also please comment any ideas or weapons you want to see from elden ring

WHAT THE SCALLOP

You're only getting five stars because of the title im going to be honest haven't even read this

I'm going to start deviating during the chunin exams.

I am actually interested in that idea but I don't trust myself to make a relation with a character that doesn't have as much time or overall in-depth character development. I feel like I would over all butcher the charecter and it would make the romance seem forced

Thank you for the honest opinion, I am still improving as a author as this is my first ever book in general.

alright i am going to try to interpret it into the next chapter

I am trying to make it show that she doesn't really see everyone as people and more as charecters I'm going to implement more life into the story once she learns that everyone around her are not just charecters she can use to her advantage.

I'm writing on my phone so I have been trying to fix the grammar in the chapters after publishing them but it was late last night so I'm currently reading them to fix it