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TheWandaShip

TheWandaShip

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Hi, I was an avid reader of fanfictions. I have read so many that I stumbled onto MTLs. And now, I help to heavily edit MTLs and share them!

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  • TheWandaShip
    TheWandaShipa month ago
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    E/d note: C78 is the replacement to MTL65. The start of MTL65 was: "Inertia closed the door of the office" .-. Inertia being Fury HAHAHAHAH. Classic MTL names. ALSO, APPARENTLY IN MTL65, IT IS CONFIRMED THAT MC IS WRITING IN CHINESE WITHIN THE DIARY, BUT THERE IS A BUILT-IN TRANSLATION, which does go in line with the whole MC is Chinese and is from SPEAR and not SHIELD in the fake world. MTL65 also talks about Tony's palladium poisoning. BUT it goes straight into that from the birthday scene. It was really weird, like one moment I'm reading about birthday gifts and Wanda, and then WHAM, Tony stark is about to die. So, I will shift that part of the diary into C79, hope y'all are fine with me ending the C78 on the birthday scene!

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    TheWandaShipa month ago
    Répondu à Ep_E_X

    i am, so confused .-. can someone make sense of this .-.

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    TheWandaShipa month ago
    Répondu à LastGod

    that's the first i've heard of the powers and story .-. May i ask in which aspects they are confusing/difficult to understand clearly???

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    TheWandaShipa month ago
    Répondu à XenonNoble

    WHY IS THERE A PART 3 ?! I TJOUGHT WE WERE DONE (T_T)

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    TheWandaShipa month ago
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    E/d note: C77 is the replacement to MTL63 because MTL63 was too, weird to use. For context, here is what MTL63 talks about: MC and Steve are fishing by a river in the suburbs of New York. They have small talk about the fishes they catch but the conversation suddenly turns to how people like them need time. It is then revealed that MC had told Steve that he is from another world. Steve also feels relieved knowing that MC is from a different world, almost like himself who is from a different time, because at least he doesn’t feel “alone”. THIS WAS NEVER TALKED ABOUT IN MY SERIES, but in the seventh diary entry in the MTL, MC writes about how he wishes he could leave the world, causing Fury to panic. I removed that entirely… But in MTL63, it talks about how Fury sent Steve to be by MC’s side because he fears MC would really leave the world. In my series, however, Steve and Luke meet because Steve wants to hear about the battle from Red Hood. So, none of that Fury scared and other world stuff. And then finally, to end the MTL63, it talks about how Fury feels like MC has robbed Steve from him because Steve denied joining SHIELD, and also because Steve is spending a lot of time with MC. As you can see from above, yeah. That’s the reason why I had a hard time writing C77. I changed everything once again and the result we got was C77 – Secrets.

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    TheWandaShipa month ago
    Répondu à poposwitch

    it's an anime trope, hotguy gets looked at by the male populace in looks of envy (envious of the good looks). The EQ part i can understand because i think i didn't portray it correctly. In layman definition, Steve would have high EQ because he is a very emotionally in-tune person. But i was using EQ in the sense that "he doesn't understand why people feel the way they feel." Like he *knows* they feel a certain way, but doesn't understand it. That's how i remember steve anyways, i haven't watched a single marvel movie that has him since Endgame, so like it's been 5 or 6 years, and i don't count his cameo in deadpool 3 since he was Johnny storm in that one. But yeah, if i'm wrong about my view on his EQ then that's on me. But i hope i've clarified why i think he has low EQ and on the "envy" part

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    TheWandaShipa month ago
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    E/d note: C76 is the replacement to MTL62 because the MTL was. . . Yeah. It's basically a meeting between Luke and Steve under Fury's orders. But I changed it to Steve wanting to meet Red Hood to ask about the battle, which to me fits more naturally in Steve's character context.  Please do not wonder why all the characters do not get swarmed when they are in public. Because in the MCU, they don't. Literally there is a MUSEUM dedicated to STEVE ROGERS, yet when he first appeared in "The Avengers", running into the streets of New York, NONE OF THE PASSER BY REACTED???? SO, I'm just going to use whatever excuse they have :D

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    TheWandaShipa month ago
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    E/d note: I am following the timeline set by this website: https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/User:Seelentau/Naruto_Timeline#1st_January_to_31st_December_50_bNb In this timeline, Warring States period ended 50 years before Naruto’s birth. And so, the era will be labelled “before Naruto’s birth” or “bNb”. The first Great Shinobi War was 34 years before Naruto’s birth, making the year of the start of the war “34 bNb”. This will be the standard for this series.

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    TheWandaShipa month ago
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    How is "Naruto" a stand out for Tobirama .-. at this point, Jiraiya hasn't even made his icha icha series. So "Naruto" doesn't even exist...

My diary system in Marvel

After transmigrating into the Marvel universe, Luke had awaken the Diary Entry System. As long as whoever that holds the diary believes and trusts in what was written, then Luke would be rewarded by his system. The stronger the trust value, the better the rewards. Editor note: Hello guys! I am not the author, nor am I a translator of this fanfic. I am simply a normal guy heavily editing an MTL of the raw "People are writing diaries in Marvel, and the Avengers are all confused". I saw some others on this app who are attempting to edit the chapters, such as "Elephas" or "BlackGoku222" but I find their edits rather lackluster. And since I am interested in reading this further, I thought i'd do the rest of us a favor of putting out my edited version of the MTL. Please note that the characters will be slightly AU. If you think that my edited version is different from the original or other versions, you would be right as I included my own elements and removed some extra information in order to try to make the story as congruent as possible. Honestly guys, the MTL is so confusing. Lastly, I will TRY my best to make this story as readable as humanely possible, but no promises for a 5-star edit as my English language was only a B3. And thanks for taking the time to read this! (Gib me cookies/stones please) (Cover pic by Nariva Amynia on DevianArt. This is not an original work, I own absolutely nothing except my own deviations to the original fanfiction!)

TheWandaShip · Anime et bandes dessinées
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My Review System: Starting with the Naruto World.

~ Synopsis ~ Fujimoto Natsu is an aspiring video content creator. Despite his hard work, many of his videos did not perform as well as he had hoped. Faced with dwindling success and the need to make ends meet, he decided to pivot to a more popular trend: creating review videos. “If I’m going to do this, I might as well start with something that I am most familiar with.” Natsu mused, settling on the ever—popular series, Naruto. Natsu originally aimed to appeal to a broad audience. However, to his surprise, his first viewer turned out to be none other than the Second Hokage, Senju Tobirama. Soon after, the Third Hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen, followed, along with the fearsome Uchiha Madara from the ninja world. ~ Editor’s note ~ Hey guys! A few months ago, I asked for a replacement series to replace my “Battlefield” fanfic that I was translating. And today, I’ve finally found one. The raw is “Start by giving Senju Tobirama an Inventory of Naruto”, and there’s actually another person who is translating this as well and is still ongoing, Nobody2nobody. I actually found this MTL because I came across his translation earlier today. But some things that were mentioned inside just did not make any sense, and it ruined MY immersion of reading. So, like the battlefield fanfic, I will only be cleaning up this series. I WILL NOT be doing the extensive editing as my Marvel fanfic, but I will promise that I will try to remove any and every content that breaks the reader immersions. For example, in the other translator’s version, in the earlier chapters, there’s a sentence: Hashirama remarked “Madara, you are like Voldermort”. Yeah, no. Hashirama should not have known about Voldermort at all .-. For those who are supporters of my Marvel series translation, rejoice! Because i will be using the same format as i translate this series as well! I know the title says "Review System", but i'm not sure if there's any actual system.

TheWandaShip · Anime et bandes dessinées
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Epic Game System, starting with Battlefield

* NOT MY FANFIC! This is a MTL that I am ONLY poison testing, removing nationalism/racism, correcting grammar, and re-formatting to my Marvel series style of fanfiction chapters. Original MTL is: I developed Battlefield to drive Players around the world crazy. Chapters will be much shorter compared to my Marvel series (since that one has original chapters and me including more elements to give more depth) * ~ Important Note about the story ~ So this story is BASICALLY a really barebones MC makes games, people react, type of fanfic. There isn't a linear plot to follow like the Marvel fic. Another thing to note is that the SYSTEM is basically only there at the start. MC only takes Battlefield from the system, afterwhich he makes the games himself from then on and the System just "disappears". No drama, no linear plot, it's just a pure if you've got nothing to read, this could pass the time for you. ~synopsis~ Alex, an avid gamer, finds himself transmigrated to a parallel world where technology has advanced beyond his wildest dreams, but the gaming industry is sorely lacking. Frustrated by the uninspired, money-grabbing games that dominate this new world, he longs for the engaging and immersive experiences he enjoyed in his previous life. Just as he contemplates creating his own games, the Epic Game System activates, granting him the ability to revolutionize the gaming industry.

TheWandaShip · Anime et bandes dessinées
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