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patrick_john_yu

Lv3
2020-08-30 JointGlobal
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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Commenté

    i just give up and maybe permanently drop this

    Ch 4 4 energy gathering
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    Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
    Fantaisie · patrick_john_yu
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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
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    :><: ■

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    Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
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    I will write my ideas in my draft but maybe if I find someone or if I finish writing the ending I will fix it then pose it again

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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Répondu à Sahs

    i agree to your review cause i am really bad at writing and i am not a literature and I don't know what to write about others cause i write what is in my imagination and sorry for the grammar i did not really my forte i got an average grade in school but i forgotten the lesson very easily

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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Répondu à AvoidanceLife88

    thank you for reminding me

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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Répondu à

    sorry I just realize my blunder of using him not her

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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Répondu à AvoidanceLife88

    ok I try thank you for your opinion

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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Répondu à AvoidanceLife88

    I modify some parts and thank you for giving me a word count on the second chapter

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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Répondu à AvoidanceLife88

    thank you

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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Posté

    this is my first novel and definitely not a novelist. I'm only creating this for my fun and sorry for my grammar because I am only a reader not a writer. English or any thing that require me to write something is not my strength.

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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Commenté

    😂😂😂😂😂

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    Rest in Peaces
    Oriental · nanchengnv
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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
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    erasing memories without concent and brainwashing can you call yourself friends after that.

    Ch 4 "Friends"
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    Remilitarization.
    Autres · Sprlte
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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Commenté

    there are misssing space right here and the other chapters its confusing so can you fix it author

    Yao Si felt that there was something wrong with her recently. She used to sleep like a brick, so even roaring thunder couldn't affect her slumber. But oddly enough, she couldn't seem to fall asleep for the last couple days, and what was even more strange was that she felt energetic and in good spirits despite the sleepless nights.
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    My Dad Is the Galaxy's Prince Charming
    Romance · You Qian
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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu2yr
    Commenté

    92,000

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    The Only Leveling System
    Fantaisie · JUnknownC
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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu3yr
    Commenté

    Ch 41 The Vegetation Spirit
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    My Master Disconnected Yet Again
    Fantaisie · You Qian
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  • patrick_john_yu
    patrick_john_yu3yr
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    Ch 38 Guests from the Upper World
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    My Master Disconnected Yet Again
    Fantaisie · You Qian
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