Anthony_Fritz_8685

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2020-08-24 JointUnited States

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Anthony_Fritz_86853 months ago
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Well written and full of action, the MC is fighting an uphill battle from the beginning; a true underdog story, but the underdog is OP, stuck fighting above his level constantly.
I Own EVERY Class in This World: Life Set to HELL Mode!
Fantastique · EndKun
Anthony_Fritz_86857 months ago
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Was 5th division or 7th division in second?
A few minutes later, the Mana Endurance Marathon race had finally come to an end. The participant from Division 4 came first. While the participant from the 5th division has managed to come second. As for the participant from the 7th division, he had come second.
Dragon Monarch System
Urbain · Dark_Bangali
Anthony_Fritz_86857 months ago
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Repeat paragraph
Finally, Sasha cleared her throat, sharing her own story which had a more complicated beginning. "I first encountered Aditya because of a really big mess. One of the assassins from my organization broke the rules and decided to take on a job to kill Aditya. The job came from the Echo Nexus empire." She took a deep breath before continuing. "The funny thing is, when we first met, I told him straight up that I wasn't interested. I said not to bother me or look for me. But as it turns out, life has a way of surprising you. In the end, I was the one who fell for him."
Dragon Monarch System
Urbain · Dark_Bangali
Anthony_Fritz_86857 months ago
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Repeat paragraph
Lara spoke up next, explaining her unique situation in a careful manner. "As for Lara, well, Lara was in a very deep sleep before meeting her husband. Someone had put Lara into a sleep so deep that Lara didn't age at all. Then Lara's husband, Aditya, came along and woke Lara up." She chose not to delve too deeply into the finer details, keeping her explanation simple and straightforward.
Dragon Monarch System
Urbain · Dark_Bangali
Anthony_Fritz_86857 months ago
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Repeat
Riya was the next to share her story, her face taking on a warm, nostalgic expression. "Well, Alicia and I already knew each other. We had met a few times for various reasons. One day, she called me to help with healing someone who had a really bad scar on their eye. When I got there, it turned out the person was none other than Aditya." She chuckled softly. "It's kind of funny how life works out like that. But even before all of that, Aditya and I go way back. We were childhood friends, you know. We used to play together all the time."
Dragon Monarch System
Urbain · Dark_Bangali
Anthony_Fritz_86857 months ago
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Why is this almost the exact same as two paragraphs ago?
The spread before them was a sight to behold, a visual feast that mirrored the opulence of the occasion. From savory delicacies that teased the palate to luscious desserts that promised sweet indulgence, the fare presented on the tables was a testament to the culinary expertise and craftsmanship of the Empire's finest chefs.
Dragon Monarch System
Urbain · Dark_Bangali
Anthony_Fritz_86857 months ago
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This chapter and the last were a lot of redundancy.
Ch 404 Chapter 404:- "The Empire's Grand Gala [II]"; A Tapestry of Envy and Longing
Dragon Monarch System
Urbain · Dark_Bangali
Anthony_Fritz_86857 months ago
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I now realize that it is intentionally Sophia, but why would she be the first there? Shouldn’t she be helping maintain her own kingdom?
Adam stood up and stepped towards the woman with long purple hair. Sophia came running to him and hugged him. Sophia hugged him back with all of her strength as if she is afraid that she might lose her husband again. These 34 days have been a nightmare for Sophia. Without her husband, she felt her entire family had been broken.
Dragon Monarch System
Urbain · Dark_Bangali
Anthony_Fritz_86857 months ago
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Sophia -> Julia
Adam stood up and stepped towards the woman with long purple hair. Sophia came running to him and hugged him. Sophia hugged him back with all of her strength as if she is afraid that she might lose her husband again. These 34 days have been a nightmare for Sophia. Without her husband, she felt her entire family had been broken.
Dragon Monarch System
Urbain · Dark_Bangali
Anthony_Fritz_86858 months ago
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Create a discord and uploads the images, the app doesn’t allow copy/paste anymore
(Here's a random image, roughly the idea.)
After Divorce, I Inherited the Game's Fortune
Urbain · Grapefruit is too lousy