Sage_of_Heaven

Keep up the great work👌👌👌

Choose Chimchar

Too bad, but good luck on your endeavor👍👍👍

I am excited because I know that your story would be one of better quality one on that website. Good luck and I might seen your story on Alternative History👍👍👍👍

I honestly did not expect this kind of historical story to be on this website. I would expect story genre like this to be on website like Alternative History. However you did a phenomenal job and keep up the great work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Agree you should put this on Alternative History!!!

Also in Alternative History there are people who could help you make map for your story for free.

Hello this is a very good story. I have question have you ever thought of posting this story on Alternative History. Since you will gain more reader there. Also here is my suggestion if you decide to post the story there. You should upload one chapter per day to slowly build a reader base instead of uploading the whole story at once.

Hello author I really enjoy your story,but I have critique for this story. -The story is very slow pace. Usually this will not be a problem for me,but I have hard time getting through chapter due to how slow it is. -The Romance feel rush. I felt that there should have been more time developing the romance aspect. -Author you have a problem of over explaining the dialogue. This contribute to the story feeling slow and boring for me. Well that all my critique for this if you fix these issue. You will certainly create one of the best or the best One Piece Fanfic that I ever read. But you have to overcome challenges like the Fanfic This Bite. Well who know you might surpass that story someday and became my number one favorite one piece fanfic. Well that all have a wonderful day and good luck.👋👋👋👋

Also have you thought of uploading this on Fan fiction?