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I really liked your book in beginning however after the turtle Guy it got stupid and now shit the story that had promised is now shit you need to back and rewrite the story form there I was hopping it was going to get better but I got worst and going down hill fast I read first book loved now this not so much it. don’t really take look at story and read it self as read mid set and not as author you really need to do this and rewrite because it crap story now please i am begging to do this for the good story .
Are going to continue your book I don ’t want to see drop please reply
II’m gonna put this year I don’t know if anyone’s gonna read BBut I’m sick and tired of people saying that majors are the best AObviously none of you play enough RPG games to know They are not Take a warrior and mage with God classes and armor the mage Will hit a point Where they need help If you read any Novel Dyou will see the mage character always end up joining a guild or a party Un like warrior class is that Remain Iindependent Because they have enough skills And reduction time Low Skills Un like mages With with high time Cool down an high mp cost next to nothing and small skills to help Warriors are better classes But any class can defeat another class Built properly equipped properly And played right You can win
I really love your book and I’ve been reading it since it came out however since around chapter 250 I can’t stop reading not because it’s not bad it’s just got boring because all you’ve been talking about The tournament sure there’s other stuff but ultimately it’s all about the tournament and I just kind of boring like 80 Chapters or something already bought the Tournaments and there’s still more time it’s just kind of boring but I have high hopes for the future keep up the good work
Are you ever going to continue the Mandalorian book I really wanted to continue I’ve been waiting for so long if you reply thank you
I’m just confuse here why did he grab the token so early This event last for 48 hours it’s only been 10 so he grabs it now makes no sense I would’ve been better to wait until a little later so let’s chance been taken away from him
Really love this book keep up the great work and please make him and Ruby get together it will be the best thing ever I really hope that . Will you keep telling people not to read this and other websites it’s not because people don’t want to support you it’s because it gets expensive I just blew off one month of tokens to read your book and I was glad I did it but it’s the expensive one month of saving passes and everything gone in about a day so I saw that you guys had to go cheaper on premium or whenever has increase the credits given I don’t have money to buy credits constantly keep up the good work
Story seems interesting however You will have to rewrite your story and switch his class from something else cannot be an assassin class you may get 40 chapters before you have nothing else to put behind on assassin story I have read mini assassin stories they do not last long is because there’s not enough story to put behind them they are one of the most Boring classes to read in a story do you will get to a bump in you will not be able to continue but good luck
Your book is very good so far interesting however Sidhe race it’s one of the most chaotic species out there they are not good the more evil however it differs they’re all about themselves they are selfish they only care of them selves on only about themselves and do we do anything to get the upper hand and power that’s what they are I just want to state that now so you may have to fix that
Stories good at all however the system Needs to be changed the Minotaur he could’ve had a health portion the rock pedal stuff he got and the acts and he could’ve made above Minotaur but he did not this is starting to tick me off and if that was the case with the system over and play it again adding the Minotaur of the rock stuff axe health potion and winG that would’ve been good Story point and something to explain the system truly because I’m confused on the system