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haha how about calling them Miss Feng then
Made a few changes in the value to make it seem a more believable Although these numbers will not work out in a real world context, I try to make it not deviate too far from the numbers
Ah yes indeed I was about to use the usual excuse that he had to wait for the lawyers confirmation, but the time period was too long So Shit
This is amazingly hilarious and remarkably perfect Even the later chapters which I read in the raw chinese novels were as good as it was when I just started reading it
And of course, I naturally try to cut down on the 'unbearable cliches', whereby other than the instance you had talked about, the rest doesn't seem too ridiculous to me My standpoint is from the chinese novels, so we may have differing views
Well, what can I say? I read too much chinese novels, and such instances has become ingrained within my mind I mean, in every other modern day city chinese novel with a male lead, there will also be cases where the person he offends in a random restaurant is the son of one of a giant company, while another person who was dying randomly barged in front of him while he was casually walking in the streets, and asked for mc to save him. Isn't it how surprising how the dying man is actually one of the leaders of a powerful underground gang? Lets not mention the numerous beauties that pop up in front of him one way or another, be it whether if he is in school, working, or simply whistling to himself while walking through a remote street. What can I say, other than this being the typical MC halo? And this is why Chinese novels have more than a few thousand chapters, while English novels stop at around a few hundred
Do you find the word "said" very irritating whenever you see it in the story, placed by itself? Because I do. 'He said, you said, I said' It just strikes a part in my brain and thoroughly reject the notion of using it It's so annoyingly irritating and frustrating to read Especially when it repeats itself many times within the same chapter
damn right
the other gang members are his subordinates's subordinates After all, you can't wish for a mere 11 people to be able to control the entire underground scene itself And there isn't much focus on them other than their numbers
Though, at least just by this question alone, I do not need to question my naming sense. For the moment, of course