Harpaa

quite decent translation, keep up the good work, and btw can you drop the link of the MTL?

it's surprisingly decent or good, very few mc is likeable, and yours is one of them, author can picture perfectly the mind of a child, be proud of your OC dear author, congrats.

to be honest I don't kinda get Madara vibe from all the chapter, maybe Hashirama will suit your character better... just passable or ok I guess

mate I suggest you read, the art of war fanfic by critKhagan , his story kinda similar tbh

remember quality over quantity, it's doesn't matter if you late a little late at uploading chapter, as along the quality of the fanfic not dropping

I'mma tell you mate, you need to go different way, because your oc just following nie Li step. and nothing interesting about that

man you don't need to follow nie Li step, this fanfic just like rename the mc and that's it

good plan though

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