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- mavis3563yrCommenté''Fine,'' Luna gazed at the glasses that resembled a similar design she saw before as she suddenly straightened her back and began to wear it slowly, trying to look cool. ''We need guns,'' Luna spoke in a serious and calm tone as she looked ahead the moment she wore the glasses, ''Lots of guns.''
- mavis3563yrRépondu à Tsumihoshi
Saying this is pretty rude to other readers. I’m also not good with english and even I can see the grammar mistakes but, imo, it’s getting better and the story itself is good when you look at the rest of the stories. It’s rare to find a famale MC and she is certainly an interesting character. The plot is still following the cannon but unlike most of the MC’s out there (the ones that doesn’t do much to change anything) this one makes changes that feels alive Grammar can fixed if the author gets better or find someone to help but i think the story is more important and this one is better than most
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‘White Demon’ De Luna sounds good for the new epithet 👍👌
''Maybe I should call you 'Flaming Demon' rather than White Demon.'' the girl also said as her voice sounded clear as if her head was not even covered with a helmet. - mavis3563yrCommentéCh 28 Goddess of War and The Broken Promise
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she had to say ‘Up!’
Luna, on the other hand, was wholly focused on pulling her katana to herself. She has stabbed the ground and go a little far away and called out words like 'Pull!' 'Come!' 'Naraka!' or even 'Rise!' while she was extending her hand towards her sword. Though it was all in vain since it never worked, and she only became a laughing stock for Zoro. They were also doing some creative trainings with everyone joining. Like playing tag or volleyball with blindfolds, and it was actually pretty fun. Robin and Luna were usually on different teams since Robin tended to cheat with her powers, and Luna had the best haki at the moment. - mavis3563yrCommentéCh 80 How Do I Teach You?
- mavis3563yrRépondu à KyokaRanger
I can totally imagine luna asks signature from naruto 🤣
''Hmm, maybe after you become the Pirate King, we can search for a way..'' making Luffy to become more excited as well as Usopp and Zoro made a weird face. 'An idiot and a weirdo...' Zoro thought as he look at Luffy and Luna while shaking his head. ''But that man is not a ninja and we're not in other universe so, there is three explanation to this that I can think of it...'' Luna keep going. They turned to her, waiting for what is it - mavis3563yrCommentéCh 1 Swindler
- mavis3563yrRépondu à Lashdokuro
🤣🤣
[There are three ways to survive in a ruined world. Now, I have forgotten a few, but one thing is certain. The fact that you who are reading this now will survive. - mavis3563yrCommentéCh 1 Swindler
- mavis3563yrCommentéCh 1 Matilda Yap/Lady Prescott
- mavis3563yrCommentéCh 20 Fall of the God and the song of the island I
- mavis3563yrCommentéCh 19 Adventure on the Sky and the Disappearing Flames II
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I cant wait to read their past now. When are you gonna write it?
''Well, we go through the Calm Belt and go to the New World before we get through the Red Line to get in the Paradise.'' Robin calmly said as everyone was blinking blankly to what she just said - mavis3563yrRépondu à DaoistSoulDive