Santy_Melay

I don't know if the novel was written this way or if the translator did a terrible job, because the dialogue is awful; it's hard to understand who's speaking. Also, the beginning of the novel moves very quickly.

I wonder where the system went?

And I wonder, where does he get the certainty that Scarface won't betray him? I feel like the author is very foolish.

I think it's really stupid to give him the ability to summon military troops; it's ridiculous and will make things pointless. Summoning weapons is already difficult to explain, but summoning soldiers is even worse. I wonder if you'll come up with an idea for how the protagonist will explain their identities, where they come from, etc.

The protagonist isn't modest; he uses false modesty. And it disgusts me; it's pathetic.

The novel is garbage. It could have been decent, but the stupid author had to do nonsensical things to increase the drama. How the hell would someone with the protagonist's power be relegated to the role of a common soldier just because his power is so brute? It's just a pathetic excuse for the author to force unnecessary drama.

When people stop expressing impossible situations with the phrase "it defies the laws of physics", they will be less ignorant, because the opposite happens, they use the laws of physics to their advantage.

The use of AI is very obvious; at least edit it so it doesn't look like it.

Otra novela escrita con IA, y no si también fue hecha todo con IA, se nota muchísimo por la forma en que está narrada. Ya no hay autores originales ni con imaginación.

Chinese authors are very incompetent; they always create the same shitty protagonist who always acts with false modesty.