Don_Esteban

pretty bad. There are quite a few plot holes and nonsensical decisions in an attempt to not make the MC look cringe and stupid, a failed attempt unfortunately. Forcing a story in a certain direction without regard for the rules of said story/world make it hard to enjoy, which is the case with this fanfic. Have a read and decide for yourself, but don't set your expectations too high.

thx for recommending it to me :D

A fine finishing touch to your original story. I'm a fan of your writing style.

just noticed I never left a review of this short story. It had a better start than most fanfics unfortunately it was dropped. Could have easily been an 8/10

no problem, hope you aced your test

this fanfic has a lot of potential, only the update frequency is a bit low. But they story itself and the adequate grammar more than make up for it. I can only recommend reading this fanfic.

nice chapter, can't wait to read te next :D

a bit harshly said, but I can't recommend this book as well, it's just the normal one piece story but boring because of the MC.